short reflection

Last week, we composed 2 paragraphs, illustrative and persuasive paragraph. Before composing, actually I was confused how to make good paragraph. So that, I tried to search, browse, and read another references about several types of paragraph. And finally I could composed it.
When we reviewed the paragraphs, my paragraphs were reviewed by Saiful Aris, and I reviewed Fitriyatuz Zakiyah's paragraphs. I think, Zaki's illustrative paragraph had no mistakes in 4 basics of good paragraph, but she just paid attention to the grammar, while her persuasive paragraph, she explain about rubbish,the type of rubbish, and cause and effect of rubbish. The conclusion of her paragraph seemed persuading the readers to keep a clean.

I think, grammar is our common mistake. So that, we must pay attention to this.

Be Careful, Guys!

Last week, we just had a meeting since Friday was holiday. On Wednesday, October 24, 2012, we had workshop, we reviewed about argumentative paragraph. I reviewed Lalang’s work. It was about diet. I think his paragraph had fulfilled 4 basics of good argumentative paragraph. It had motion, didn’t focus on a view, but presented the opposing views. Those included in characteristics of argumentative paragraph. Good job, Lang!

As I said before, our mistakes, including mine, are in grammar and punctuation. So, we must be careful in using those.

Our mistakes….

On Wednesday, October 17, 2012, we reviewed our friend’s work, process analysis. At that time, I reviewed Ainur Riza’s work. It told about how to make Nagasari cake. Over all, it was good paragraph because it presented the sequence order and the essential steps of making Nagasari cake. The mistakes were in grammar and punctuation. It was also our mistakes that always be found in writing. Sometimes we didn’t pay attention to those, whereas those profoundly impacted the meaning and the effectiveness of paragraph or sentence.

On Friday, October 19, 2012, we reviewed about definition paragraph. I reviewed Tryas’ work. It told about definition of honesty. It was good paragraph because it has clear topic sentence that defined the topic, honesty. It also presented the detail examples and concluding sentence. The mistakes were as same as Ainur Riza’s.

I think, not only Tryas and Riza have those mistakes, but also we do!

So that, we must be careful to use grammar, punctuation, etc.

Good luck!