Our mistakes….

On Wednesday, October 17, 2012, we reviewed our friend’s work, process analysis. At that time, I reviewed Ainur Riza’s work. It told about how to make Nagasari cake. Over all, it was good paragraph because it presented the sequence order and the essential steps of making Nagasari cake. The mistakes were in grammar and punctuation. It was also our mistakes that always be found in writing. Sometimes we didn’t pay attention to those, whereas those profoundly impacted the meaning and the effectiveness of paragraph or sentence.

On Friday, October 19, 2012, we reviewed about definition paragraph. I reviewed Tryas’ work. It told about definition of honesty. It was good paragraph because it has clear topic sentence that defined the topic, honesty. It also presented the detail examples and concluding sentence. The mistakes were as same as Ainur Riza’s.

I think, not only Tryas and Riza have those mistakes, but also we do!

So that, we must be careful to use grammar, punctuation, etc.

Good luck!