Last week, we composed 2 paragraphs, illustrative and persuasive paragraph. Before composing, actually I was confused how to make good paragraph. So that, I tried to search, browse, and read another references about several types of paragraph. And finally I could composed it.
When we reviewed the paragraphs, my paragraphs were reviewed by Saiful Aris, and I reviewed Fitriyatuz Zakiyah's paragraphs. I think, Zaki's illustrative paragraph had no mistakes in 4 basics of good paragraph, but she just paid attention to the grammar, while her persuasive paragraph, she explain about rubbish,the type of rubbish, and cause and effect of rubbish. The conclusion of her paragraph seemed persuading the readers to keep a clean.
I think, grammar is our common mistake. So that, we must pay attention to this.
"but she just paid attention to the grammar"
BalasHapusI think that sentence is ambiguous meg, whether Zacky only paid attention to the grammar and she didn't pay attention to another aspect, or she need to be more careful in grammar.
I agree with your sentence about grammar meg, if we have good idea but we don't use grammar correctly, our writing will be nothing.